Monday, May 2, 2011
This book Glass Castle is about Jeannette wall early life and her parents life too. she is talking about how her parents been change their life one day Jeannette was out and she saw her mother on street picking the trash she feel so bad and she hide from here mom because the people will see here mom looks like homeless people. She also talking about here childhood life she used like pink dress.
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Hi, Ikran. This seems more like a summary of the introductory chapter than a claim about Jeannette's mother based on what you have read in the book so far. A lot happens to her mother before she becomes homeless--based on those things, what claims can you make about her? Remember, a claim is an opinion that you form based on what you've learned about someone. The rest of the paragraph's job is to explain to readers the evidence you used to form your opinion.
ReplyDeleteAlso, make sure to cite page numbers for quotations and paraphrases!
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