The tighten wordy sentences is not necessarily wordy, nor are short sentences always concise. The reason the teacher say to have minimum page is to have short and clear sentences. The more you tighten sentences the more you get organization paper. For example, repeating the same line over and over it is necessary thing to do that for a paper. There is something call wordy it means that to over saying it and if there is stuff that you need to delete to make it more clearer for the reader to understand and make it pretty short not extra with writing.

in this page 238 she tells her Dad that she doesn't believe the glass castle any more because of he told her some many times and she figure out that he will never build it.Also she is trying the leave the city and her dad trying make her stay with them so he want make her happy

I feel like her family is outstanding as the love side but lass care of their kids especially her Dad he love her a lot and she trust him a lot. Jeannette’s Dad is drunk but still he love his kids more but sometimes he care more about how he gone get money so he can buy drunks .one day he let his daughter to go upstairs with a man because he take a money from that man and he can’t give him back so the man said ‘’ I’m going to take your girl upstairs’’ (walls 212). He didn’t say no he let him so her Dad loves her but he care her lass because he wouldn’t do anything like if he care her more.

In this pages i have read was a good information about her life experiences and how the life was hurt in back days when she was a young.Her father never let her down because of he was know anything about family he used to go around maybe sleep somewhere else.

time management

My experiment for the reading the pages 155-158 was not good. First, it took me 5-6 minutes to finish the chapter to finish it. Even though I was reading fast I could not understand what was mostly happen in the story. I think the only part I kind of understood was the part where the rat was killed by the dog and then got shot by the neighbors. I would say that reading to fast would not make you understand most of the story that is happen in the chapter. I learned that next I need to read slowly and then I might understand what I wrote.

This book Glass Castle is about Jeannette wall early life and her parents life too. she is talking about how her parents been change their life one day Jeannette was out and she saw her mother on street picking the trash she feel so bad and she hide from here mom because the people will see here mom looks like homeless people. She also talking about here childhood life she used like pink dress.

I wrote one sentence which was supposed to be two sentences. I have a great thesis but the sentences structure is incorrect made the same point on the same sentences’ need to explain the significant point. My observation is wonderful but need to explain how it makes a “making statement”. The problem I have is I always think about how many pages that I need to write but sometimes I don’t make clear point. I have interesting ideas but they lack support that ties them in with your thesis. I need to explain how beautiful the women are supposed to be.