The tighten wordy sentences is not necessarily wordy, nor are short sentences always concise. The reason the teacher say to have minimum page is to have short and clear sentences. The more you tighten sentences the more you get organization paper. For example, repeating the same line over and over it is necessary thing to do that for a paper. There is something call wordy it means that to over saying it and if there is stuff that you need to delete to make it more clearer for the reader to understand and make it pretty short not extra with writing.

in this page 238 she tells her Dad that she doesn't believe the glass castle any more because of he told her some many times and she figure out that he will never build it.Also she is trying the leave the city and her dad trying make her stay with them so he want make her happy

I feel like her family is outstanding as the love side but lass care of their kids especially her Dad he love her a lot and she trust him a lot. Jeannette’s Dad is drunk but still he love his kids more but sometimes he care more about how he gone get money so he can buy drunks .one day he let his daughter to go upstairs with a man because he take a money from that man and he can’t give him back so the man said ‘’ I’m going to take your girl upstairs’’ (walls 212). He didn’t say no he let him so her Dad loves her but he care her lass because he wouldn’t do anything like if he care her more.

In this pages i have read was a good information about her life experiences and how the life was hurt in back days when she was a young.Her father never let her down because of he was know anything about family he used to go around maybe sleep somewhere else.

time management

My experiment for the reading the pages 155-158 was not good. First, it took me 5-6 minutes to finish the chapter to finish it. Even though I was reading fast I could not understand what was mostly happen in the story. I think the only part I kind of understood was the part where the rat was killed by the dog and then got shot by the neighbors. I would say that reading to fast would not make you understand most of the story that is happen in the chapter. I learned that next I need to read slowly and then I might understand what I wrote.

This book Glass Castle is about Jeannette wall early life and her parents life too. she is talking about how her parents been change their life one day Jeannette was out and she saw her mother on street picking the trash she feel so bad and she hide from here mom because the people will see here mom looks like homeless people. She also talking about here childhood life she used like pink dress.

I wrote one sentence which was supposed to be two sentences. I have a great thesis but the sentences structure is incorrect made the same point on the same sentences’ need to explain the significant point. My observation is wonderful but need to explain how it makes a “making statement”. The problem I have is I always think about how many pages that I need to write but sometimes I don’t make clear point. I have interesting ideas but they lack support that ties them in with your thesis. I need to explain how beautiful the women are supposed to be.

The naysayer is hater who talk negatively to you and tell you that you wont make it so that they can have an edge on you and eventually be on top of you. They will get on your head and tell you all kind of negative stuff. They are there just to hurt you and tell you negative things so that you can fail and not be successful. Naysayer is important because you want to be successful against them hater's and you want to be on top of the haters. You are driven to hammer the haters.

One topic that i can talk about all the time is the experience that i had in my life which i would like to share with others. the most experience that i had in my life was meeting new member in my family i never knew that i had that big of family. for example: one time i went to Toronto Canada and meet about 30 people of my family member i was so surprised that i had that kind. i enjoy spending time with them which adds more experience in my life, they take me to amazing places which is beautiful and it was wonderful time i had and i will never forget the moment i had with them.

A quotation sandwich is when you write a topic and you start the bread is the introduction and you are telling the information of where you get a quotation and introduce the person who writes the quotation. The meddle place of the sandwich is the quotation and the last part is you gone explain why you chose it. Hate and run means when you use later from somewhere else without explain from where, you pretend it's like you’re on worlds you just grab there and wake away without given detail from where you get it.

Custom-made

Custom-made is talking about the diverse companies that make a difference like Domino’s pizza delivery some countries doesn’t like to make delivers like in Britain, customers don’t like the idea of knocking on the doors. In America we believe that we have the best delivery pizza. It also talking about where the companies began or the original places and how it became international. This topic about the fast food in world and I like the way the makes clear of the junk food we eat in world I like the Doman pizza delivery I call the number when I am starving and don’t feel to cook then it’s easy to get it right away so interesting and easy life.

A conversation is when two people or more people are talking about anything and discussion and making a feedback that is how I know a conversation. Exempla I am in facebook and some one new is online talk to me and asks my name? Then I respond the person I say my name is Ikran what you’re your name too? and then person says I am Muna nice to meet you, nice to meet too. That is how conversion go asking question and answer or feedback is like everything you share with anther person

Ikran Suleiman
Alyssa Francis
English 110.03
4/4/11

In this world which we live today the technology is very important. The item we bought is laptop. one important thing about the laptop is you can carry it around anywhere outside or inside and it’s everyone who go university because we do a latter of papers every single classes or we do a research too and we do Carmen website to get more information about the school also we have Buckeye link so all those thing are enviable on intranet so it’s good for me to have laptop anytime anywhere so it can be easy to do my work at school. The reason that I bought it is for the school and it help me so happy to have it so helpful.

hello!

hi everyone my name is ikran Suleiman I am from Somalia i graduated form Mufflin high school and now i go Ohio state university i am so glad to be a good student and always like to be respectful student .I work at daycare i love the little kids because are to incessant and so kind.