Monday, May 16, 2011

I feel like her family is outstanding as the love side but lass care of their kids especially her Dad he love her a lot and she trust him a lot. Jeannette’s Dad is drunk but still he love his kids more but sometimes he care more about how he gone get money so he can buy drunks .one day he let his daughter to go upstairs with a man because he take a money from that man and he can’t give him back so the man said ‘’ I’m going to take your girl upstairs’’ (walls 212). He didn’t say no he let him so her Dad loves her but he care her lass because he wouldn’t do anything like if he care her more.
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  1. AlyssaMay 19, 2011 at 8:16 AM

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  2. AlyssaMay 19, 2011 at 8:17 AM

    This doesn't quite fulfill the prompt. I am looking for specific evidence about how you FEEL about her life, and then another developed paragraph about how she feels about her life.

    For example,it's interesting that she could have lived such a hard life, and still she doesn't HATE her parents. She loves them, but thinks they are flawed. She also doesn't seem to feel sorry for herself, even though we feel sorry for her.
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